help... essay grammar

<p>could anyone help me with my essay?!.. please!!!.. I need someone to look at it before sending it!.. thanks in advance</p>

<p>I could look at it if you like. I'm already a college freshman, so no fear of plagiarism.:)</p>

<p>thank u very much!.. but I already sent it!.. too bad.. it was a scholarship essay..</p>

<p>No sweat! Hope the scholarship comes through:)</p>

<p>hey jrock ur nice! :D</p>

<p>I just wondered......if you had already sent it..then why take the trouble of starting this thread ????</p>

<p>duhh.. 'cause when I started this thread I hadn't sent it ..</p>

<p>Right....you sent it in 25 hours after you posted the thread....</p>

<p>Wow that gave us alot of time to check your post :)</p>

<p>gee you just waited 25 hours for a response on editing ur essay.....well life's fast with all these computers and stuff but...not that fast</p>

<p>ok I'm sorry.. it was a last minute essay!..</p>

<p>and it was for....? don tell me wustl.</p>

<p>the lowe's scholarship.. but I guess I didn't qualified 'cause I don't live in the US.. my bad!..</p>