help! i wrote an essay but it's risky and needs work!

College Essays
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<p>hey so i wrote an essay for tufts and i'm not particularly sure if it's safe to use as a college essay, if it sends across the right message, or if it says enough about me. can i get a few opinions on it?</p>

<p>if you read my essay i'll be willing to read yours in exchange. let me know!
email: <a href="mailto:midnightfire01@gmail.com">midnightfire01@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>i can either PM or email essays. whatever is better for you. let me know.</p>

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<p>ill be glad to read it. pm it to me!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read yours if you read my common app. Pm me</p>