<p>I need help with my essay. I have a lot of difficulty writing creatively, and would like someone to read it and tell me whether the essay "shows" or "tells" more. Non-09ers only please.</p>
<p>I need help with my essay. I have a lot of difficulty writing creatively, and would like someone to read it and tell me whether the essay "shows" or "tells" more. Non-09ers only please.</p>
<p>Show</a>, don't tell</p>
<p>(and/or google "Show Don't Tell")</p>