<p>-I don't like 3 literary examples in a row. "Throughout millennia, mankind has made prodigious amounts of discoveries" makes me think you're going to talk about reality.</p>
<p>-Too many big words, it seems forced.</p>
<p>-I don't like 3 literary examples in a row. "Throughout millennia, mankind has made prodigious amounts of discoveries" makes me think you're going to talk about reality.</p>
<p>-Too many big words, it seems forced.</p>