<p>Thanks guys; I'll try to implement the suggestions in my next essay, as I only got these comments afterschool (after I wrote my second essay)</p>
<p>I'll type it up and post it in a second</p>
<p>Thanks guys; I'll try to implement the suggestions in my next essay, as I only got these comments afterschool (after I wrote my second essay)</p>
<p>I'll type it up and post it in a second</p>