<p>And remember, you are quoting novels that are FICTIONAL. So, while they can usefull as support, using only fictional novels can result in a weak essay as opposed to using historical or personal examples. I think one literature example is fine, just extend on it with examples from reality.</p>
<p>I'd say use words like "esoteric" that the reader will likely know but that are still impressive. Don't flaunt your intellect or memorizing skills by writing an essay replete with words like "obstreperous" and "penguid."</p>
<p>Try to end your body pargaprhs by explaing why the example applies to your thesis statement. Finally, don't fret the little details like misspellings or an occasional comma splice. Write a strong 1st draft and you'll be rewarded by a 5 or a 6.</p>
<p>I think you will do fine. Your writing is similar to mine, and I received a 12 on my essay on the May SAT (to my surprised). I only used 2 examples (1 historical and 1 literature, exempted personal) and put in just a few somewhat large words (ostentatious, avant-garde were some). Try and lengthen out your conclusion by restating what the examples imply i.e "As seen in Hamlet, and the events occurring in Vietnam, blah blah blah" I ended my essay with a totally PS, open ended philosophical idea which I suppose worked. Use alot of transition phrases like "Furthermore, moreover, Subsequently, Hitherto, Evidently"</p>
<p>sorry guys for the lack of updates -- I havent had the chance to write any essays in about a week, due to school. I will, however, continue on Tuesday, and after that will produce at least three more essays before the big day</p>
<p>thanks for the support!</p>