<p>I've written one but it's very generic--- parent's immigrating to America/value of education.
The second one is about experiences in China and their lack of medical care. But I wrote it recently, so it's not very well written.</p>
<p>If you would like you could give me critique on both essays but all I really want is for you to choose which one the admissions would rather read...</p>
<p>thank you!</p>
<p>Well I think I am pretty much set to read essays the rest of the night :) I've enjoyed most so far. If you would like to send it over I will read. I would prefer email though so if you would like me to look them over, critique, and pick my favorite just PM and I'll give you my email.</p>
<p>Choose the one that is the most personal, detailed, honest and revealing. </p>
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<p>There are no generic or cliche topics.</p>
<p>There are only generic or cliche treatments of topics. </p>
<p>Imo, keep that in mind when evaluating you two essays.</p>
<p>thanks for the advice!</p>
<p>As ADad said "the one with most details", I will chose the first one because you give it more time.</p>