<p>i dont think neither of them are good, but i need to decide on one of them, and then maybe add more content to it.
Please offer me some critiques, pm me, thanks</p>
<p><em>edit</em> i mean, i'll pm you</p>
<p>If you still need it, I can go through your essays.</p>
<p>quickflood, if you dislike both, then don't send either one. Harvard doesn't require it and they said that you should send one only if it DEFINITELY shows a side of you that couldn't have been seen before?</p>