Hello! I have a few essays written out and I would really appreciate it if anybody could read them and give me feedback. I definitely have the most trouble with the conclusion/reflection part of the essay and would love it if you have suggestions on how to change my essay. Be as harsh as you can, I’m far from perfect! I currently have three essays on: snails, scuba diving, and spiders. I need to decide which one to use for my official common app essay, so if you could give me your ranking from best to worst, that would also be wonderful. Thank you!
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Sent them! Thank you so much, I need a LOT of help on my essays.
I can help you!