Help Me Get into Yale

<p>So could anyone read my essay. I really want to go to Yale and I would appreciate it! Can mostly college students give feedback who have alrealdy been throught the process?</p>

<p>I'm class of '09, but I'm not applying to Yale. I just love reading essays. :)</p>

<p>Incoming fresh.</p>

<p>Sure, I'm a rising junior. You can PM it.</p>

<p>I'm class of '09 but not applying to Yale. I love reading essays, PM me!</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>okay! let's help your essay get you into yale! send it o'er! :)</p>

<p>Sure, PM me or email me at <a href="mailto:RayAllen333@gmail.com">RayAllen333@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>i'm a Princeton guy so I don't know if Yale would go down well with me, but i can read it.!</p>

<p>PM me, I enjoy grading stuff and writing is probably the thing I am best at, of things you need to do for school anyway.</p>

<p>im a rising senior i dont plan on going to the top schools, but i am gona apply to good schools like 30ish tiers, berkeley is my #1 choice.
so yeah,i'd like to see how ur yale's is.</p>

<p>ill read it.
<a href="mailto:timmy16263@gmail.com">timmy16263@gmail.com</a>
or PM me :D</p>

<p>PM me i'm up for it</p>

<p>Sure PM it to me!</p>

<p>i'll give it a read</p>

<p>sure, pm me</p>

<p>If you still need some more advice, I'd be more than happy to read it.
PM me or send it to <a href="mailto:dorkerrhea@gmail.com">dorkerrhea@gmail.com</a>.</p>

<p>pm me too if you need
i love reading/writing essays :D
(brown class of '12)</p>

<p>I'd love a copy as well.</p>

<p>I'll be frank - I'm class of '09 and I'm applying to Yale. But I have written most of my application essays including those for Yale (I've completed essays for 8 out of 11 schools to which I will be applying), but if you don't feel comfortable sending them to me, I understand completely. ; ) Just PM if you feel like it: I will give you a critical/harsh albeit hopefully helpful response.</p>