<p>Could any cornell student please read my commonapp essay and give me some feedback on it?
I've completed my rough draft but I don't know if its up to cornell's caliber...
Please. I would really appreciate your help :D</p>
<p>soft thing</p>
<p>I’ll take a look at it if you’d like. PM me it and I’ll respond on it.</p>
<p>^^ so, would you like to look at my essay and tell me if my softness comes out from it? :D</p>
<p>i’d be glad to!</p>