<p>Please help me improve my essay and give me any feedback on it.thanks i appreciate it
..ill pm it to u</p>
<p>ppl are putting way too much emphasis on the essays for ucs…but i’ll still read it if you want</p>
<p>Just PM me… I will send you comments about the overal structure, tone, topic etc. (no proofreading).</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM me!</p>
<p>Hahah congratulations on finishing. Sure I will read it.</p>
<p>PM it over =)</p>