Help Me Please Lrg

Applying to College
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<p>hey guys, this is the prompt: In reading your application, we want to get to know you as well as we can. We ask that you use this opportunity to tell us something more about yourself that would help us toward a sense of who you are, how you think, and what issues and ideas interest you most.</p>

<p>i really wanna write about a rite of passage ceremony i experienced in another country, since it was amazzzzzzzzing. </p>

<p>do i have to be more straightforward? or will a significant experience essay work to?</p>

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<p>go for it.................</p>

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<p>Well, don't just write about it just because it was a fun experience, make sure it does convey who you are. Basically don't describe the event, describe yourself.</p>

<p>Have fun!</p>

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<p>xXPhoenixFireXx is totally right.
as long as you focus on how it was important to YOU.
and do a lot of SHOWING , not TELLING. ;) good luck</p>

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<p>thanks a lot guys</p>