Help me please! UC Application Personal Statement 1!

College Essays
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<p>Can someone please proofread my Personal Statement for UC Davis? It is the first one.
I will PM you the essay. </p>

<p>Here is the prompt:</p>

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

2

<p>I’ll read it if you can read my common app essay. I’ve already submitted it for a couple of colleges, but I want to know whether its good or not so I decide whether I should re-write it.</p>

3

<p>Sure! I’ll give it a look!</p>