<p>Hello, i'm french and want to get into Harvard...
I have a friend there and he wants me to tell him why do i want to go there.
But i don't know what to say, i don't want to seem crazy... there is what i think i'll send to him:
i want to get into Harvard because i think this school can stimulate me intellectually; to deepen in labs, rub the great names of science is exeptional for me not to mention the studious atmosphere that looks great!</p>
<p>Unless your friend is an admissions officer, he can’t do much to affect your chances of admission, so it makes more sense to use him as a source of information who can help you learn more about Harvard so you can develop a clearer answer.</p>
<p>Meanwhile, it looks as if you’ll need to improve your written English to have a chance. Your message started off well enough, but things really fell apart in the phrase “to deepen in labs, rub the great names of science is exeptional for me not to mention the studious atmosphere that looks great!” </p>