HELP me rip apart my commonapp essay?? :)

College Essays
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<p>Hi! does anyone wanna help me edit my essay?? that would be WONDERFUL. and be as harsh as possible please! haha thanks</p>

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<p>oh im early decisioing to wash u if that helps in anyway?</p>

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<p>ill look at it</p>

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<p>PM it over!</p>

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<p>I will look at it, pm it over :)</p>

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<p>hey smarts. clear up your inbox! hah</p>

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<p>sure. If you want any more help^^</p>