Help me shorten my common app essay!!

Will anyone help me cut down the length? I really like my topic but my essay is at 1000 words and I can’t seem to make it any shorter. I need a fresh pair of eyes. Is anyone willing to help?

I will, PM me

If u trust me, u can send it to me? But can you in return judge my essay please?

Don’t send your essay to brand new posters, read the warnings and suggestions at the top of the forum.

I’ll help. PM me.