Help me with my Common App Essay?

Hey guys, this is my first college essay I’ve written so far and I would like to know if it’s ok or on the right part. I’m not exactly the best essay writer, so if you guys could help me out and tell me what needs fixing, that would be great. The essay is an engineering essay for a certain college, post in here and I can PM it to you.

i would love to help

Count me in…also need someone to read my commonapp essay…

Send me as well :smiley:

@Malcomx99 if you don’t mind I can read it for ya :)))

I’ll read it.

@Quanh261997 lol i just scrapped mine…am starting over