<p>Pleeeeeeeeeease? (:
My essay right now is about 650 words...
And I need help cutting more words, and making it...better. I feel like it can be much better than it is.
Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>Sure I’ll try my best to edit it!
Will you read mine? I really need some feedback…</p>
<p>I’m willing to read anyone’s here as long as they read mine. Shoot me a PM.</p>
<p>im in desperate need for feedback so i would love to read it if you can give me some</p>
<p>yayy okay i’ll PM all three of you with mine, and you can send me yours (:</p>
<p>Send me yours. I will critique. but you should help me too.</p>
<p>I’ll definitely help you (:
I sent you a PM!</p>