Help me with my essay anybody?

<p>Im wondering if anybody wold like to read and critique my essay?</p>

<p>pm me if you like</p>

<p>PM sent. Anybody else?</p>

<p>i already submitted my essay...grammar mistake in title "dreams comes" gawd. do u think it will majorly affect their decision? bk to your post, pm me - I will be hard on grammar 'cause i just messed up -___-"</p>

<p>you know what, after I submitted my essays, I didn't look at them EVER again until decision came out. My advice, if you find a mistake, you can't really do anything about it, so just don't go look for one... Unless you need to use the essay for another college!</p>

<p>yea, ill check it out and give feedback, already got accepted to my ea school so yea</p>

<p>Sent. If possible, could you reply in the next two days please? thanks....</p>