help me with the application essay

<p>i have just finished the supplement essa for cornell.
"tell us what you'd like to major in at cornell and why. how your past academic or work experience influenced your decision, and how transferring to cornell would further your academic interests?</p>

<p>who can help me read it and give me some advice..</p>

<p>I could help proofread. PM me.</p>

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i have just finished the supplement essa for cornell.
"tell us what you'd like to major in at cornell and why. how your past academic or work experience influenced your decision, and how transferring to cornell would further your academic interests?</p>

<p>who can help me read it and give me some advice..

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<p>Nice try troll. The application was due already. Sorry <3.</p>

<p>The OP is a transfer applicant....if you read the essay prompt carefully...you know that.</p>

<p>OP: I transferred to Cornell in 2005...send your essay to me and I'd be happy to provide some feedback.</p>

<p>yes, i am a transfer student....</p>

<p>Private message us. You can message us by clicking on our name and going to Send private message, or something along those lines.</p>

<p>OH! My bad!</p>

<p>I just finished reading the first sentence and I thought it was the same topic as the undergrad freshman admission essay. My apology.</p>

<p>:) that's fine.</p>