<p>Well, I have written a first and second draft, but I am clueless on where to go from here. I don't know if I should start over, write a new essay out of the same topic, or just revise the second draft. It would be helpful if some CCers would read my second draft and tell me where to go?</p>
<p>Why are you thinking of starting over? Is it bad or something? Do you not like the topic?</p>
<p>If you're comfortable with it, you can pm it to me. Sometimes a different perspective will work things out, but don't you think scrapping it will be a waste.</p>
<p>If you'd like, you can PM me it. I'm class of 09 and a very strong writer--I'm asked to proofread a lot of research papers for friends and such. If you're interested, I'll give my thoughts....</p>
<p>I'm not sure if I already read your essay once (I remember your name from some thread) but I'd be willing to look it over. going to be a freshman.</p>