Help Needed w/ Essay

<p>Would anyone be willing to give some criticism, direction, and help in editing one of my essays?</p>

<p>Bump. Please, any help would be greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look</p>

<p>Yeah sure</p>

<p>I can read it!</p>

<p>Sure, pm me if it you want some feedback.</p>