Help on a pretty boring essay

<p>I've written an essay for the Common App topic of your choice thing, but I think it's pretty generic and boring. It honestly is about something that has drastically changed my life, but it's hard to show that it's not just another "and then I sang on stage and conquered my fear" essay. My entire personality really has changed largely because of one experience, so I'd really like to share this story.</p>

<p>Please PM me if you'd like to help!</p>

<p>I’m an '09er but I would love to help with it. PM me please!</p>

<p>sure, pm me</p>