Help on Essay! (PLEASE read!)

<p>I wrote an essay, which I'm probably going to use for the common app. It was a unique experience of my life, and I know it's essay-worthy, but I'm not sure how to get that across to the reader. If someone could look over my essay, and give me ANY helpful tips, it would be GREATLY appreciated.</p>

<p>Please PM me with your email (or write it on here), and I'll send it to you. Thanks!</p>

<p>you can pm your essay to me</p>

<p>you can PM it to me</p>

<p>I will edit and look them over for you. Just PM me your essay(s) if you’re still interested in having someone look them over :)</p>

<p>yep you can also pm me!</p>

<p>you can pm it to me</p>

<p>Hey I can help, pm it over!</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>