Help on Essays

<p>For prompt #1 You’re suppose to describe the world you come from (for example your family, school,etc) and how it has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Would these two themes be okay?</p>

<li><p>How my parents didn’t go to college and that made me very determine to set high standards for myself.</p></li>
<li><p>I grew in a predominantly hispanic community and how this open my mind to understanding other ethnic groups. I also want to elaborate how this exposure made me understand that we do not all act the same (thinking out of my realm). I’m worried about this theme here because I’m afraid that it may seem I’m kissing up or this may be offensive. What i’m refering to is how the hispanic community is recieved by others. For me I support a lot of what they do and believe because I’ve lived among them and I understand partly how they feel. And by the way if you haven’t figured it out I’m white.</p></li>
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<p>Are these two thems okay? What else can I write about?</p>

<p>sorry wrong area...I'll move it to the General UC section.</p>