Help on My Common app essay

Okay hey guys this is my first thread
I’ve been struggling with my common app essay and I needed some help with editing it and I this wonderful place and here I am! So I chose the first essay prompt…please you would literally save my life if you take a look at my essay and help me fix it … So if youre interested lemme know and I will send it personally to you which ever way you want it .(Oh God that sounded so wrong.)

I’d be glad to look at it :slight_smile:

PM me I’ll read it

pm me I will help you :slight_smile:

I will help you
But where is the essay

Sure, PM me the essay

PM, I’ll help out.

Pm me dude. I no a good story :slight_smile:
*sorry, didn’t read ur username lol

Im a senior applying for college and i’ve written my essay and I think its almost there. I made a big decision in sending my essay to someone on college confidential, but because I sent it, I produced an incredible essay. I’ve learned a lot in the process and I’d love to offer some input.
Just for assurance that I wont steal your essay lol.