Help on my supplement essay for BU

Heyy so I need help with my supplement essay for Boston University… I can’t post it here because I’m using my phone right now and its on my laptop so if you wanna help me, send me a message or comment and I will personally send it to you :D. Oh and please be very critical haha thanks

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