help on UC essays due in 2 days!!!

Applying to College
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<p>there are 2 short ones (200 words)
and one 600 word essay</p>

<p>anybody want to take a look?</p>

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<p>i can help out.</p>

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<p>sure ill check it out</p>

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<p>please i need more opinions..their pretty short wont take much time</p>

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<p>i'll be a third opinion.</p>

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<p>ill read too</p>

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<p>I'll read.......</p>

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<p>send them to me</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>i'll read them</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>i need more readers that will acutally give me feedback
i have only gotten 2 comments
please help only 1 day left.</p>