HELP. Please read my essay!

<p>Hi people,</p>

<p>Could anyone please help me with my essay. I just finished my essay but i desperately need someone to read it for me. I need your help to tell me if its good, give pointers and criticism and help me improve it. </p>

<p>Please, thank you.</p>

<p>p/s please private message me for my essay thanks.</p>