HELP, PURDUE ESSAY DUE 15th JAN! NEED SUGGESTIONS/REVIEWS/FEEDBACK PLEASE!

<p>Dear all college confidential users,</p>

<p>Up until now, I was receiving feedback on essays from a cousin, an aunt, a teacher, and my girlfriend, but they are all busy, and I'm feeling very unsure of my Purdue Essay.</p>

<p>Here's the question that I decided to answer:</p>

<p>"Envision yourself near the end of a fulfilling, lifelong career and you just published your autobiography. Share the title and introduction."</p>

<p>I feel it's a decent-ish essay, but for some reason, I'm very unsure as well.</p>

<p>PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HELP ME!</p>

<p>Please post an email address, send a message, or any other medium you prefer, and I can send you my essay.</p>

<p>If I don't get any replies, I'll post my essay here in a day in hopes of any and all feedback.</p>

<p>Thank you and to all fellow applicants: Good Luck :D</p>

<p>Regards,
Zee</p>

<p>Want to trade?</p>

<p>Would love to!</p>

<p>Just sent you an email, send me yours as soon as you can :)</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>