<p>I am the worst writer, I have this an essay written up for college but I think it sucks. Any edits you want to do feel free to do. Thanks for your help! (I will PM it 2 you)</p>
<p>WELL, I have redone alot of it and I am kinda stuck at this one part, any suggestions? (I will PM)</p>
<p>Sure, I'll check it out. PM me.</p>
<p>pm it to me :)</p>
<p>I'll take a look and give you some feedback.</p>