Help reqd for an essay on diversity for UCSB

College Essays
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<p>Can anyone please proofread my diversity essay for UCSB????
Pls provide some comments that can help me to make an better essay.....</p>

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<p>Hello I in a need of some desperate help any one??</p>

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<p>Sure...Ill read it. PM</p>

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<p>Thanks Klitzy anyone else..</p>

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<p>i'll read it, pm me</p>

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<p>Thanks eric, anyone else would like to read it and comment on it.......</p>

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<p>There's a diversity essay for UCSB? Huh?</p>

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<p>send it over</p>