<p>Would anyone be willing to read over my UC Essay (Prompt 2) and hopefully offer some advice on editing it or how I can make it better?? Any help would be much appreciated!</p>
<p>sure, i can help</p>
<p>I need help
where do i start!!!!
ok so, I've spent three months revising my PROMPT 1 that I completely forgot about the second prompt. please help!!</p>