I wrote an essay for the first UC prompt (Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations) and was wondering if I could get some feedback. I have shown the essay to a few friends and revised it three times, and wanted to get some more help before showing it to a teacher. If any of you would be willing to go over it and critique it, I can PM it to you (I accidentally posted my first draft on here earlier).
Thanks!
pm it, i’ll look at it