Help! Someone please look over my UC Essay!

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Let me know if you would be willing to do so and I will send it to you! Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>@nagintapls thank you so much! I sent it to you</p>

<p>I’ll read it. </p>

<p>@letsgocatchfish okay, i’ll send it to you!</p>

<p>I can read it</p>

<p>I can read it as well</p>

<p>I’m happy to analyze it</p>

<p>@Phongtheha @Remi56783 @‌Te4mVygrin Okay! I’ll send it to you guys! Thanks in advance :)</p>

<p>@Te4mVygrin</p>

<p>I’ll read it for you if you want me to.</p>

<p>@capitalamerica okay thank you! I’ll send it to you right now </p>

<p>PM me and I will read it.</p>

<p>@sgopal2 okay! I’ll send it to you right now </p>

<p>pm me and i am willing to read it</p>

<p>@TrinityChen Okay, thank you! I’ll send it to you right now</p>