Help!Tone of activity lists?

<p>I know most people encourage the neat format of 'introducing the activity, describet your position and involvement' , but some did do their activity lists as a kind of extremely short essay(with anecdotes and exquisite language). Any idea about which one is better?</p>

<p>I would try writing out your activities both ways and see which way YOUR activities present better. Son and D’s formats were completely different.</p>

<p>Thanks for the reply,smoda61~</p>