HELP! UMich Diversity essay, 500 words!!

<p>I wrote my diversity essay for UMich, and I think I did a good job, but its 500 words and I can't figure out how to cut it down! Is it acceptable to send like this?
(the recommended word count is 250)</p>

<p>Please help, I only have one day to finish!! :(</p>

<p>Hi MR2200!</p>

<p>I'm interested in helping you out. Send it to my e-mail at <a href="mailto:diligenteagle@hotmail.com">diligenteagle@hotmail.com</a>. You don't need to do anything in return, because I just got accepted to UMIch today.</p>

<p>Good luck!
-ab2013</p>

<p>I'll read it :]</p>

<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>