<p>hey guysss... so i never knew how difficult writing a conclusion could be.</p>
<p>can you read my essay, edit a little and maybe suggest a conclusion to write??</p>
<p>thanks! (PM instead of posting here, btw)</p>
<p>ok so i wrote a conclusion… now is anybody willing to edit?? pulllleasseee</p>
<p>I’m an '08 applicant, but I promise not to steal your essay. 
I’ve already written all of mine anyways. </p>
<p>You can send it to me and I’ll look over it for you! :)</p>
<p>Bumppppppppppppp</p>
<p>if you want someone who is around now you can send it to me</p>
<p>getting mixed reviews… help?</p>