Help with an Essay

<p>I posted on another board soliciting essay advice with no respond. Then I read that the parents forum is very helpful. If you are willing to help, email me at <a href="mailto:tman27615@hotmail.com">tman27615@hotmail.com</a>. It is actually an essay that I used for the Stanford app and am changing it around to fit the common app prompt about a risk that I have taken. Thanks.</p>

<p>Anyone that read my other post too, sorry for the double post.</p>

<p>Send it to me via PM and I'll take a look at it.</p>

<p>bump...one more opinion would be nice.</p>