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<p>Firstly, i don’t think you should be posting actual essays here. someone might steal it.
Secondly, it’s a little bit cliche (your topic). Believe it or not, a lot of people write about sports. However, the fact that you are a girl competing on a boys’ team will give you an advantage.
Overall, a good essay.
Good luck!</p>
<p>smart idea :D</p>