<p>so i have this sentence: The robbing of my possessions and house was incomparable to my parents and brother still by my side. </p>
<p>but my teacher said to reword it. Any ideas to how i could change it?
thanks!</p>
<p>I don’t understand the sentence. Does it mean that you were robbed less than others? Please clarify. </p>
<p>-Double Posted-</p>
<p>ahh sorry. my essay is about my house fire and the sentence is talking about how losing all my belongings doesnt compare to my parents, brothers and i still alive and safe. if that makes sense? :)</p>
<p>Understood. The original sentence does not deliver that message. I would go with something like: “Although most of our possessions were perished in the fire, the things I value the most - my family - were out of the harm’s way”</p>
<p>@viphan Thank you soo much! Much better.</p>
<p>Hello @viphan , very nice advise, makes it best</p>