Help with Common App essay

<p>Hi to all, this is my first post! I just finished my essay, so it would be great if anyone would be willing to take a look. I would really appreciate any comments. I could pm or email it to you. Thanks a bunch.</p>

<p>you can pm it to me, and i'll get back to you asap.</p>

<p>ill read it just pm me</p>

<p>i'll read it for u as well!</p>

<p>feel free to pm!</p>