Help with Emory Supplement?

<p>So I'm applying to Emory University and I'm in the process of writing the essay for the supplement. However, I've gotten kinda stuck and I could use help. Plus, I'm skeptical about my grammar. Any takers?</p>

<p>Ain’t no one there?</p>

<p>Uh, what would you need help with?</p>

<p>I would like for someone to read over my essay through PM.</p>

<p>I’m working on emory supplement to I can read over yours for you if you want</p>