Help With Essay Please

<p>I wrote my CommonApp essay today. It's a rough draft and it is supposed to be 150 words, but I have 207 words.
If someone is free and is willing to read my essay and help me with it, please tell me.</p>

<p>Thank You So Much.</p>

<p>if u dun mind, i will read it. pm me</p>

<p>I'll read it. I'm the editor of a newspaper, I'm good at cutting things down!</p>