<p>One of my essay topics is to write about my passion. I have chosen my passion and have already written drafts of my essay, but I don't know if I've included everything I should. Should I give detailed examples to prove that I am good at this activity as well?</p>
<p>I’m not exactly sure what you’re asking, but yes, in general, it is always a good idea to give detailed examples over, say, abstract philosophizing about why you’re passionate about something. Show don’t tell (or…a little bit of telling goes a long way.) From the essays I’ve seen posted here (not a practice I’d recommend AT ALL), student essays tend to be way too abstract. Your stories are what will make you real and appealing to your reader.</p>