<p>So I finished writing my essays and sent it to a senior studying in harvard. He gave a pretty good response and i was exhilarated and forgot the essay entirely for some days. When I looked at it again, I felt it wasn't clear as it was on one of my activities which is really unique.So I sent it to another senior studying in princeton( ok I'm showing off :D ) and he said that it isn't clear. so i need someone to read it. I'll read your essay or anything back.</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>sure i’ll read it.</p>
<p>yes pm it to mee (:</p>