<p>Could someone please edit my application essays for a summer internship I am applying to? They just sound wrong to me and I can't figure out why. PM or post here. </p>
<p>They're short. There's two of them, and they're approximately 300 words.</p>
<p>Sorry, I don’t want to post my essays publicly as I may be accused of plagiarism or the essays may be stolen by someone else.
Does anyone have any advice? These are the two prompts.
In no more than 500 words, please describe why you are interested in applying for the Summer I.T. Intern Program, what you expect to gain from participating in the program and how it may impact your future goals.</p>
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<li> In no more than 500 words, please describe your aspirations for a career in the computer/technology industry. Include one or more examples of how you have already applied your skills, other than as a classroom assignment.</li>
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<p>I’m going to write your essay for you, m’kay?</p>
<p>Oh wait…</p>
<p>No…
I already wrote my essays, I’m just looking for someone to edit them…as you can see that I wrote in my first post…
Please don’t bother posting if you’re not even going to read the thread.</p>
<p>Bump…
PLEASE NOTE: I AM ASKING FOR SOMEONE TO EDIT MY ESSAYS, NOT WRITE THEM FOR ME.
I HAVE ALREADY WRITTEN MY ESSAYS.</p>
<p>Please PM me if you can help! Any help is greatly appreciated.</p>
<p>send me a pm and ill read over them</p>
<p>Alright, thank you so much for doing this! :)</p>
<p>Bump…</p>
<p>I’ll gladly take a look at them, send the prompt as well.</p>
<p>Thanks! :)</p>