Help with ideas, too risky?

College Essays
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<p>Alright, would anybody be willing to read my essay? I am having a bit of writer's block right now, kind of have an idea of what direction I want to go in, but not sure. Also, please tell me if what I have written is too risky (went for being kind of funny, might be too much of a risk).</p>

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<p>you can send it to me (PM), and I can help you with it</p>

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<p>I can read it, if you'd like.</p>

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<p>I can read it</p>

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<p>PM the essay to me and i'll critique it for you.</p>

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<p>I can read it if you want; just PM me and I'll critique it!</p>

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<p>Okay! I JUST FINISHED mine so the ideas of writing and grammatical structure are fresh in my mind.... I'll help if you would like!</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you'd like.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look. PM me.</p>

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<p>me too. PM</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>