Help with main columbia essay?

<p>For my main Columbia essay I am debating between my common app essay, and another essay I wrote answering the question "Who Am I?"</p>

<p>Can anyone read my "Who am I?" essay and tell me if they think it's good to submit it to Columbia?</p>

<p>Thank you</p>

<p>anyone? bump</p>

<p>i submitted my columbia app earlier in december, so i can read it if you want.</p>